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Peter Piper - why the library?

Posted by Peter Elliott from Rhondda Cynon Taff - Published on 01/11/2010 at 21:01
6 comments » - Tagged as Comedy, Creative Writing, Culture, People, Yn Gymraeg

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Soon after Peter and Gareth saved Lilyana they sat outside drinking Pepsi Max and....blood....Peter asked "why did they strap you to that chair to get blown up by a bomb? It's not like your alive or anything... No offense.  They strapped me to that chair to die because in that bomb was loads of sun-rays given to them by the god of sun,  Mr S. Un nobody knows his first name and probably never will.  Replied Lilyana "ok, how did they get you to the library, were you already there?" "yep, I was looking for the book of spells, that was what they were probably there for too. The book of spells can destroy anything, but it survives like a vampire....on human blood!" Gareth then looked as there was a long black car passed and were shooting at them. "get down!!" shouted Gareth. As they passed Lilyana, Peter and Gareth, they raced after them in they're Aston Martin.  Peter and Lilyana started  to shoot back at them while Gareth tried to show off his driving skills to the girl he fancied, LILYANA!  As Peter was shooting he noticed civilians behind the car flying! "what the..." asked Peter. "the vampires of Aberdare!" replied Lilyana. "they're all vampires in Aberdare!" asked Gareth. "yep" answered Lilyana. "I don't normally team up with them, but it looks like I will, putting up with you two idiots." joked Lilyana. All three laughed. Gareth still shocked of what the vampires said to himself, "I wonder if I have a chance with Lilyana?

What happens next?
YOU DECIDE!!

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Vampire Timelord

Vampire Timelord

Commented 31 months ago - 2nd November 2010 - 16:26pm

If u are going to write a story read mine first she was kinapped and she knows nothing about magic she is a slayer not a witch and whos blood is she drinking

Peter Elliott

Peter Elliott

Commented 31 months ago - 2nd November 2010 - 19:30pm

Actually, u read mine, I've not criticesed yours. So please don't to mine.

Craig Wicid

Craig Wicid

Commented 31 months ago - 4th November 2010 - 09:45am

Hi guys, your both writing different articles and this site encourages young people to be creative. Maybe we should get you both to "join forces" and pop along to a WICID editorial meeting? Please email info@wicid.tv for more details.



Peter Elliott

Peter Elliott

Commented 31 months ago - 4th November 2010 - 20:09pm

I'd be delighted to go to one of your meetings, vampire timelord is in my school so if she doesn't get the message i'll tell her in school tomorrow. i've emailed the e-mail address, see you soon :)

Vampire Timelord

Vampire Timelord

Commented 30 months ago - 5th November 2010 - 16:01pm

There is something wrong with my E.Mail I can not E.mail it

Peter Elliott

Peter Elliott

Commented 30 months ago - 7th November 2010 - 20:06pm

its ok, ill do it for you :)

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